Wow Gwen, I just finished reading this today! (Sorry, I cannot visit this forum often as I did in the past) It´s a lot of fun and I thank you wholeheartedly for your efforts... this must have taken a lot of work, girl! But I love the way you managed to put most of our suggestions for the plot and characters into the screenplay... You´re definitely on your way to become a fine scriptwriter, WAY TO GO!!
Thank you so much for taking our brainstorming ideas from awhile back and turning them into a "WHO DUN IT" screenplay featuring our very own Nic as the sleuth!
This must have taken a great deal of time and creative energy and I thank you for taking the job on!
What a hoot....with some twists and turns! I loved it! Thanks again! B
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I invited you to report that the extracted bullet was from Bill Hamiltons gun. He shot at you. We need to interrogate him and complete investigating the case
Scott
Excuse me, but Ive got serious evidences on my fathers murder case. But please give the case to another detective. Bill Hamilton has attempted not only upon me, he killed my father. He needs to be arrested immediately
Sheriff
Dont worry about it. Everything will be done
42 ext One year ago, café-day
Roy has come to Scotts town to invite his parents again. The two are sitting at the table and eating, drinking, and talking
Roy
I cant help wondering, youre so famous. All media was dealing up with that trial
Scott
They like talking about nothing.
Roy
Come on, tell me how you did it
Scott
Tell what? It wasnt my service
Roy
Nevertheless Im waiting. What did that scoundrel overlooked?
Scott
Its funny to say, hes poisoned his cat. That was a fabulous cat let me tell you
Roy
Why has Gabrielle being convicted?
Scott
Well, I guess you already read everything. She was a child, she had some feelings, he was willing to help her, than became her daddy, and then a lover
Roy
I knew that Gabrielle was a bitch!
Sorry
But who is Hamilton? They say he was a highly skilled specialist in a financial field of knowledge?
Scott
He was ruined by a huge love towards himself. And slowly this love gone hatred. This feeling was so strong that he lost his ability to analyze
Roy
Why did he attempt upon you?
Scott
Youre remembering our flame on Gabrielle. He was spying on her each time we were together then she admitted that loves me and he decided to kill me
Roy
But why did he kill your father?
Scott
Almost Same thing. Hes been in love with my mother from school but she chose my father. And he decided that fathers death could help him to connect with my mother. But he was mistaken
Roy
What were your feelings when you got to know Gabrielle is your sister?
Scott
Well, first of course I was shockedYou know, sometimes I think I have an angel or something like this and it helps me. It also helps me to analyzeYou may think Im crazy
Roy
How do you call Gabrielle?
Scott
Now I call her Sabrina
Roy
Is it really true that she insisted to kill your father?
Scott
NoI mean, I dont believeThat rascal lamed all blame on her. Needs to be kept in mind that she was a kid!
Roy
Did you help her in any way?
Scott
In which way? In the trial? In justification? The main thing is that I did away the diary, the main evidence. In the diary her aunt was suspecting her of a thief of the poison. No matter what the version is there are no evidences
Roy
And do you chat with Sabrina after all?
Scott
No.She doesnt want to and says it right to my face. I dont understand her. Shes about to move away from here. This is the right decision. She has a perfectappearance to regulate her life anyways
Roy
Listen, but who poisoned the cat?
Scott
Bill. He was watching me, saw that I talked with his mother. He asked her, she said that I wanted to buy a kitten. Then he killed the cat to deprive me of it. And thanks to this fact I puzzled everything out
Okay, I think we better stop talking about this. Tell me about yourself
Roy
Are you ready? I mean, Ive got soo much to tell you!
