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Nicster screenplay Part 4


28 ext Scotts office room-morning

                             Scott sits at the table reading

                His Assistant comes in

                         Assistant

                             May I come in?

                                            Scott

Come in

                 Assistant

Mr. stonewaller, Ive learned the following: that Bill Hamilton has been working there more than 20 years. Hes left to work as a waiter in restaurant. He has explained it to that hes tired of mental work and so on. In other words, hes found a justification

29 int Street-day

Scott goes along the street, thinking

(Voice-over)

Okay, Bill Hamilton, lets try to learn something about you. First, youve worked at the same restaurant where my father has been poisoned. Plus, the question is how you are connected with Gabrielle

Ok, first of all Ill check your neighbors and then visit your mummy

Calls at a door to neighbours

A 50 year-old woman opens the door

                       Scott

Excuse me; do you have a Labrador puppy?

                       50 year-old woman

                       No, weve got only one and its not Labrador

                       Scott

   Aw, Im so fond of dogs, I hope to buy oneperhaps your neigbours have a dog?

                              50 year-old woman

                              Oh no, Im pretty sure they dont have dogs. And do you like     cats?

                                            Scott

                                    Yeah, I like cats

                                    50 year-old woman

                              If so you can go to them, they have a marvelous cat brought from Russia; I heard it will have kittens soon. So you better hurry up until they havent been finished

                              Scott

      Okay, thanks for the prompt

Goes to neighbors, opens the wicket and see a woman in the garden

                              Woman

                              Are you to us?

                              Scott

Yeah, Id love to buy a kitten. Your neighbors told me that you have a cat

                              Woman

Oh come in, I think kittens will be born soon, about a month or so. But they already have buyers though, but if she gives birth to five you can buy one

                                         Scott

                            Oh thats greatDo you live alone?

                                 Woman

                                 No, with my son

                                 Scott

                                 He has a family?

                                 Woman

Unfortunately, no. hes very careful but hasnt got married yet. Its a very painful theme for him so please dont raise it if hed be nearby

                                        Scott

Sure, of course I wouldnt. So when should I come?

                                        Woman

                                        Two weeks later. Hopefully youll buy one

                                Scott

               Okay, thank you

 

A man stays behind a tree and watches Scott leave. This man is Bill Hamilton; hes a person of a small growth, much older than Scott

                                  Bill Hamilton

                                  Mum, who is he? Why did he come?

                                                             Woman

                                                             He wants to bye a kitten, I promised him that

                                       30 int Street-late evening

Scott goes along the street. Suddenly he hears a rustle. He turns around, beholds a figure in the dark and at the very same time falls down. The shot is heard. The shooter escape

He gets up hardly, touches his chest, its bleeding. He slowly comes to his sisters house. His brother-in-low stays near the house and smoking

                                                Scott

                                     Joehelp

                                     Brother-in-low

                                     Oh man, what happened??

                                     Scott

                               Im shot

                                     Brother-in-law

            Sit here, you need to be in hospital

31 ext Hospital-day

Scott lays in the bed, his colleague sits next to him

                         Colleague

                                 Thank god, the bullets pass near the heart so youve got nothing to fear of. And we got material evidence, the bullet extracted by the surgeon       

                                                             Scott

                                       Thanks, its so unexpected

                                                         colleague

                                                      Do you have any suppositions on who could do that?       

                                                      Scott

                    No, no idea. I think I havent made enemies here

                                     Colleague (leaves)

                                                            Okay, get well soon. But if remember something-call me

                                                            Scott

                      Sure, thank you

 

                                        30 ext Scotts office room-day

Scott sits at the table reading something. The Phone rings

He takes it, listens

                              Scott

             Okay, Im going out

31 ext The Gain restaurant owners house-day

Everything around is messed. Corpse of a woman is on the floor, everythings covered with blood

 

                                                             Sheriff (To Scott)

         Urgently gather all employees of the restaurant and the neighbors, perhaps somebody could heard something yesterday

 

32 ext A Big room, same house-day

Scott sits at the table, his assistant stays close to him

Scott

Done?

Assistant

Yes

Scott

So lets start

The camera focuses on the watches, it shows 10 a.m.

                                           Assistant causes the first witness, he comes in. Its a middle-aged man

                                                                          Scott

                              Your name

                                                               First witness

                                                               Simon Storm

                                                               Scott

                    What did you do last night?

                                                                  First witness

 

                          After closing the restaurant I cleaned the dust around the  building, watered flowers. Then I went home. It was 10 p.m.

                                  Scott

Has anyone else stayed at the restaurant?

 

                                                                   First witness

                                                                   I dont know

                                                                   Scott

                                                         Undersign for the given evidences here

                                                 33 ext Same room-day

                                                 Another witness talks to Scott, a 40 year-old pretty baker lady

Another witness

                                                   She was a friend of mine and usually I go to her office to say bye

                                                             before leaving. And so was yesterday. When I came to her in nine evenings I noticed that she was very upset, I asked her about this. She said that she was the other day for clairvoyant. And she was upset because the clairvoyant told her that she will die soon I asked her to stay for the night in my house but she refused. I left at 9.30 p.m.

Scott

Whats the clairvoyant name?

Another witness

                                                             Norma Wickerson

                                                             Scott

                                                             Sign here

                                                             Next!

                                                 Sabrina comes in, passes slowly, and sits down

                                     Scott

                               Your name

                                                                   Sabrina

                                                          Sabrina Taylor

                                          (He continues writing but gives a glance at her)

 

                                                                   Scott

What do you work as?

Sabrina

As A waitress

Scott

What did you do last night?

Sabrina

I came home after work and fell asleep

Scott

At what time was it?

Sabrina

Around 9.20 p.m.

Scott

Sign here

She walks away; he takes a deep sign, closes his eyes and stays in this condition about 5 seconds

                                            Scott speaks aloud to himself

No hooks yet and no suspected except Simon Storm

Comes out to the corridor, sees a stout woman sitting close to the doors,

                                   Scott

                                   Youre to me?

                                   Stout woman

                                   Do you hold an investigation on Martha Stewart murder?

                                   Scott

                                   I do

                                   Stout woman

                                   Then yeah

 

34 ext same room-day

They come in

Scott

Your name

                                                           Stout woman

                                                             Darcy HartI guess, I know who might do that

                         Yesterday approximately at 10 oclock I was suffering from a very high blood pressure, I took a medicine and went to bed, but couldnt fall asleep. I got up to open the window, it was at 10 30, I saw that Simon Storm closed the door and left. Then I had a nap. I woke up because of the gains gritting sound, I saw that Simon opened the gains and came inside. I was surprised. I switched the light on and looked at the watches, it showed 1 40 a.m. My sleep had gone. I was wondering why he came, I started waiting. About 40 minutes had gone and then the gains were opened again and he came out. Thats all

                                            Scott

Thank you so much Mrs. Hart, Im sure your evidences will be very useful

 

35 ext Scotts office room-evening

An assistant comes in to the office room, speaks to Scott

And another assistant

 

                                                                 Assistant

                                         Well done, gentlemen! The boy even had no time to pack up. Searched, found both the knife and the bloody clothing. By the way He took only   27 thousand dollars

                                         Scott

                                         We got luck. Thanks to the witness. You know, these old women amaze me.It Seems like they behold everything, know everything.

                                         Assistant (laughs)

But they have multiple sclerosis, huh?

                                         The three start laughing

36 ext Scotts house-night

Scott laying on the bed, thinking

 

                                             (Voice-over)

                                                         So many questions and no answersHow is Gabrielle connected with Hamilton?... Gabrielle isnt Gabrielle, shes SabrinaSabrina met with my fatherits a gibberishAnd there is some clairvoyant, she know somethingI gotta meet with her, and with TaylorDamn, I forgot about the kitten, gotta buy it until someone else forestalls. What will I do with it?.. Give him to MartinSo first of all the clairvoyant and then everything else

 

 

                       



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