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Nicster screenplay Part 3


18. int same day-another house

                      Scott comes to house, the door opens and a man comes out

 

 

                                                       Man

 

                                  I was waiting for you. Lets talk in my garden

They sit

                     Man

So youre looking for the Stabyhoun, as I know there is only one man who has owned it. But he was killed many years ago so I think the dog was sold or is dead

                                                       Scott

                  But perhaps he has some relatives who are alive, and the dog lives with them?

                                     

                                                     Man

                             No, his daughter lives in his house now and there are no dogs there                                           

 

                                             Scott

Listen, why are you so into this breed? I think Brazilian dogs are pretty good too

 

The camera zooms away from them and shows the two from afar

Then comes back and shows them again

                                       Man

You know, she was so cute, everyone adored her. But In the old age she was very sick, I suggested lulling her but my wife and children insisted to keep her alive

A friend of mine advised to me to poison her and no one would ever know anything. And then gave me an address of a woman who has poisonous mushrooms. Its sufficiently to give one spoon of it to a dog to let it die instantly. Finally I dared and went there. She leaves not far away from here, in a small town, everyone knows her there. Shes a redshank so strict, you know, questioned about everything, forced me to sign in her register but gave the poison after all

 

19 ext Scotts office room-day

Scott sits at the table and writes something. The door opens and his assistant comes in

               Assistant

Mr.Stonewaller

Scott

Oh yeah, go to the Gain restaurant and copy out the information on the beginning and ending of working. When has lived or wheres living now according to this list

(Gives the list)

Assistant

How fast?

Scott

Within two days please. The more information the better

He Leaves

20 int Street-day

The car drives up to a house. Scott comes out, goes to the house, rings the bell

An elderly but still a very pretty woman named Mrs. Taylor opens the door

 

            Ms. Taylor

          What can I do for you?

     Scott

Ms. Taylor?

Ms. Taylor

Yes

Scott

My name is Kyle foster. Im here because of a quite unique situation

(He comes in)

I live with my sister and her family, we have an aged dog and hes very sick, and is suffering alot. My friends dog-breeders told me that you have a special poison so Id love to know if its possible

Mrs. Taylor

Why didnt you go to a medical unit?

 

Scott

Im afraid that my visit may become known by my relatives, you know theyre so fond with this dog

              Ms. Taylor

Youre mistaken, my sister was into herbal treatment, but she died seven years ago. Im no judge of it

   Scott

 God, Im so unluckybut perhaps your sister left something after herself

                  Ms. Taylor

                                                Well, you can check out her trunk. Maybe she left something                               indeed

                                                         She brings a wooden trunk, takes off the cover. The trunk contains five sections; each of them contains lots of bottles and packages

                  Ms. Taylor

                                             As you see its all she had

    Scott

Excuse me Ms. Taylor, could you please make some coffee to me?

                     Ms. Taylor

                            Oh sure!

She leaves the room and Scott begins glancing the writing books which were inside the trunk. He takes one from the bottom, looks over and realizes that its a diary. He quickly puts it to his jacket pocket

                                        Ms. Taylor comes in; she holds a cup of coffee and a tattered writing book

    Scott

                         (takes the cup)Thank you!

Ms. Taylor, I see you got such a nice face. I guess you were just stunning
ms. Taylor

                                                   I had two sisters and I was the ugliest out of them(laughs)

The eldest who was a redshank was gorgeous and the youngest was very pretty, too

                             Scott

How long do you live here?

                             Ms. Taylor

                                                           Pretty much. My sisters and I were born here

                              Scott

                                                     And how there were your destinies?

                             Ms. Taylor

                                                  Frankly speaking, not so well. Despite our appearances.  Only younger sister has a daughter but shes a natural 
                                      Scott

                                                           Does your niece visit you?

                  Ms. Taylor

No, Sabrina visits me very seldom. When she was younger she stayed for long

Scott

Thank you so much Mrs. Taylor

Ms. Taylor

                                          Aww, youre welcome.     Will be nearby-call in

21 ext . Car-evening

The car goes on a wild line. Scott is inside. Thinking

(Voice-over)

How Quickly I was winded. Thank God I found this woman, precisely her sister. Wonder whether is in the diary something usefulhardly. Man, its more difficult than I thought

God, already approached. Okay, first I gotta hide the diary and thenGabisweetieGod, how I wish to see her. After yesterdays Im enamoured in her even more strongly. Ill burn down from such a passiondamn, its hard to believe Roy was right

Diary diaryonly after Gabi

22 int Street-day

Scott goes along the street, Roy goes towards to him

Roy

Hey pal! Hows it going?.. Looking for your girl? I saw her ten minutes ago going to square with some man

Scott

Yeahthanks, I was looking for herIll call you tomorrow

Roy (Quietly)

She got you!

23 int Street-day

Scott goes in a direction specified by Roy

He sees Sabrina sitting next to a man. He turns off for a corner and watching them

The man near Sabrina looks very raised. He suffices her for hands then falls to her knees and starts begging her

She jumps up and tries to leave, he catches her. They come closely

Scott imperceptibly goes after them. They approach Sabrinas house and stop, then she starts stroking him, they hug tenderly and then she walks away

A man goes very slowly then he approaches a house, looks round, whips a scarf his face and then enters this house

Scott remembers the address and walks away

24 ext Room-evening

Scott sits in the room, thinking. He looks very sad and perplexed

He awakes from his thoughts and starts looking over the diary

Jenny comes in

Jenny

Are you ok? You look so sad

Scott

Oh, no Im ok. Im exhausted but its ok, you neednt worry about that

Jenny smiles and walks away

Scott

(Voice-over)

Oh damn, all is written on my person. Gabrielle unsettles me. How could she do that?... Okay, I need to relax and get it off my mind

Starts reading the diary again

In the diary:

Yesterday I discovered that the bottle with a mushroom poison is gone. I asked Rose but she said she didnt take it. I started analyzing; no one could take it except Sabrina Went to Katherine and talked with Sabrina, she swore that she didnt take anything but I dont believe. God, please help me

Scott (in a rush)

Man! When was that? Where is the dateokay, here it is

(Voice-over)

So the theft happened for a year and 23 days before fathers deathhere is a little hook

Starts reading again

25 ext Office of public Prosecutor-day

Scott comes out of his office room, his assistant to him

 

Assistant (gives a list to Scott)

Heres all information 

Scott

Thanks

He leaves

Scott puts the list to the folder and slowly goes on the corridor

 

                                               (Voice-over)

                          No, Im not in the mood, I cant concentrate better leave this thing for some days.

 

                                               I gotta meet Gabrielle todayShould I tell her about yesterdays?..

            Of course not! Id better wait until she tells it herself. I definitely need to learn more about this man but not today. Only after Gabrielle

                                               26 int A shined street-night

                                               Sabrina goes behind Scott, laughs, and conducts him to the hotels door

                                27 ext They enter the room, Sabrina is a little drunk. She starts kissing him, they having a long French kiss and then he tries to push her away

                                             Scott

               Wait wanna drink something? Oh youre already drunk though

                                       Scott pours some whine to himself, Sabrina approaches to him behind and starts taking off his jacket and shirt. He turns to her and they lay to the bed kissing. Then he jumps up

                                 Sabrina

                        What happened?

                  Scott

Sorry, I cant

Sabrina

But why? Did I do something wrong?

Scott

Its not youIm tired

Sabrina

Are you turning me out?

                                       Scott

                                       Listen, I think we better take a break and check our feelingsand now you better leave

                                       Sabrina

                                       You want me to leave?? Okay, Im leaving. Take care!

                                             Scott

                                             Should I hail a taxi?

                                             Sabrina (In a rush)

                                            No, thanks!

                                             She leaves

Scott stays leaning against the wall and looks in the mirror

                                                   Scott

                             Well done, Scott! She left, that means you split. Congrats, youve just lost the love of your lifewell done!

 

 



-- Edited by Gwen on Thursday 17th of September 2009 09:09:03 AM

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