Are you suggesting that our lovely woman in the shower is doing more than just washing the evidence down the drain? LOL!
Note to ask Censors: Can we get this in if we're sticking to a PG13 rating?
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We could even start the movie with this particular scene.................We don't get to see her face in the shower but we know........that the grisly murders will be committed by one of the women we are about to meet in the movie!
"Which one?"....will be the driving question in the audiences minds as they are introduced one by one to the female characters, all of whom seem so innocent....
GOD............I want to break out into a guffaw like this:
"Hell begins on the day when God grants us a clear vision of all that we might have achieved, of all the gifts which we have wasted, of all that we might have done which we did not do" ~~Gian Carlo Menotti~~
love it! could be our first clue she's not the wide doe eyed innocent. i really see her in my head as a fifties style classy blond bombshell with ruby lips
If Gwen is the killer, is she similar in character to Sharon Stone's murdering femme fatale? That would give her a chance to have a shower scene with our Detective.
Or.....Gwen could be filmed in a sultry shower scene where she's all alone and seductively washing the blood from her latest killing spree off of herself.
It could be a scene where we don't actually see a lot of nudity but we get teased by a gorgeous leg or shoulder, the hint of a breast silhoutte....We could maybe see her behind a glass door where then we see her drop a knife and we see blood come off the knife and swirl down the drain.....
All teasing visuals but still within the PG13 rating so Ilia and other youths can see the movie.
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I will indeed summarize all this information for Gwen......great idea!
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I think gwen will be completely confused from ur storylines, Bonnie, my english is poor /you know middle europe accent/, can you make some summary from this - I mean casting: detective .................nic cage his sister/forensic doc.................jeny crazy resident cleaning lady......................mara etc...
and outline some more clear lines - shower scene - yes advertisment -yes wild sex scenes..................yes, yes, yes blood .......................3% of blood screaming...................2% I mean of movie time ..cant wait
and upps I forgot hapily live ever after................wih you
My character thanks you for the vote of confidence! LOL!
I promise you.......the loyal sidekick/confident turned lusty lover in the true love sense of the word would konk the workaholic detective over the head and whisk him away to a deserted island where she'd love him into submission and force feed him until he gained weight and his eyes would once again looks lively and michevious.
By the time she'd be done with him, he'd be a well fed and delirously slaphappy sleuth!
Ahhhh......doncha just love them dar fairy tales???
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"Hell begins on the day when God grants us a clear vision of all that we might have achieved, of all the gifts which we have wasted, of all that we might have done which we did not do" ~~Gian Carlo Menotti~~
Um.....so does this mean that after the murders are solved, The Detective and his loyal confident/sidekick get to ride off together into the sunset to live happily ever after????
Ooooh......I really, really, really love this storyline!
In my opinion, it couldn't happen to a nicer gal.
Geesh....and now I'm sounding like Charlie Kaufman.......lol!
-- Edited by Oom at 11:27, 2009-02-25
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hello!!! not just b/c needs comfort, but realizes sexual tension that has been building from the beginning, which he ignored b/c of friendship with sister, all comes to surface because his emotions are raw and he can't fight what he feels anymore. sidekick is supposed to be true love finally realized. and YES you still have to tell baker about it. i'll figure out the logic for that given time...
Wait a minute! Are you saying the Sidekick/Confident character has hot sex with Nic's character, the detective, only because he needs comforting over the Doc's apparent suicide but in reality murder and then blabs about the lusty deed to her good friends the Baker and the Cleaning Lady?
Haaruumpph!
Why girls! Really now! You've just taken the Sidekick/Confident character OUT of character. She's a woman who knows how to keep her mouth shut.
Plus she's not the type to sleep around and certainly wouldn't allow herself to be used for sexual pleasure unless she had the heart and soul of the detective and he had hers.
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maybe the doc finds out gwen is the killer from her forensics and that's why she has to be killed. nic walks in and catches her in the act, but too late to save her. lots of anguish/ self-torment possibilities. OR gwen kills doc but makes it look like a suicide. nic knows she would never do it, but no one believes him and he has to go rogue. seeks gwen for comfort and discovers something of doc's gwen has kept as a trophy, thus solving the case. seeks out oom for comfort b/c she is doc's best friend and that of course leads to hot sex - the details of which she must spill immediately to baker friend.
Maybe not Mr Clean but surely Roy Waller would be concerned with making sure there were plenty of cleaning supplies on hand for your character to use, Mara dear.
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Jenny your idea is just great! Of course, I´m the cleaning lady and all sorts of cleaning products could be casually advertised onscreen... Now, would Mr Clean kindly help us finance the movie, lol?
I am not the firsl victim, I will be the last, you know the movie will be almost finished, all secrets will be solved and uncovered, we will wait for the end in rest, and ...........BUM::::::::::::::I have to die ... pretty stupid end, it´nt it?
Okay! So now we have our first victim figured out! It's our very own Dr Jenn.
But wait! Does she accidentally kill herself somehow? Cuz I thought we'd decided that she was a BAAAAD Doctor and that she was a murderer!
Maybe she does it so she can throw some sort of 'wrench' into her devious and diabolical plans?
No....that won't work..........it'll get too convoluted!
Or maybe our second murderer/ Gwen's character does her in because she's Jenn is grabbing to much attention form Detective Nic?
Oh dear....we're gonna def have to sort this out. If I have time later in the day, I'll recap all the ideas we've got going here before we all become a little confused....
-- Edited by Oom at 09:13, 2009-02-24
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Gwen....to answer your question..............We def have to have a scene of Nic slugging down Scotch and puffing on a stogie. It would solidify him as the quintessential sleuth!
You're brilliant, ya know that???
-- Edited by Oom at 09:08, 2009-02-24
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Hey piegirl, I am with you, the shower scene will be OKAY, Hey Gwennie, OK you wil be the murderer, and may I ask you something? I was wondering if I could die tragically in the end of movie and NIC will be sad, sad, sad, and then will be healed from sadnes by several femme fatales - our nicsters.
i am a pepper, so i chose soda-the type to be decided later. and there is bound to be room for hygiene/ grooming products as i expect at least one shower scene... pretty please;)
Ist - parfume , because Dr. forensic working in morgue strongly need to be covered with a smell of something unusual
2nd - a NIC CAR - NIC is driving to police department /sudden break to the motor oil section advertisment with a slogan More moisture - better work / i mean the engine of course/
3 rd - cigarets - in my country the cigarets adv. is prohibited, but you know how much money could be shared by tobacoo industry
another articles - scalpels, knifes, and other instruments - SWEDEN IRON well and washing powder, in my country almost every adv. is for washing powder - DR will have contamined dress od white coat from blood -
Okay...........because of the very wise noting of our resident Dr Jenn......it's come to my attention that we need to use ADVERTISING placements in our Nic movie.
So now the challenge is............for EVERYBODY to come up with EITHER a real product to use in the movie OR a Nicster invented one....
Be creative folks! Come up with an item and an advertising slogan to go along with it.....
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